What do you think about my poem on writers block?
As I take my pen to express my pain
No words come through my mind
I can hardly talk
Or think of any words to say
a window into my soul—-
One that is now nailed shut
No words will come
Let alone stay
I just have nothing to say
Its horrible and hard
It just caught me off guard
A combination too difficult to decode
No cure, no answer
I could not possibly tell
When I fell straight into a hell
A hell with no words no feelings,
Writer’s Block.
and the most wicked thing is…
how wrong I was when I wrote this
i just want to know what you think if its good or bad and tell me what to do to improve it too!
- Lizzy Cullen
Tags: Feelings, Hell, Poem, Soul One, Writer's Block
May 26th, 2009 at 4:05 am
pen to pain, no
word to say, no
way to the window
nailed shut, no
words, no thing
to say
nothing
but a small spider
outside the glass
May 29th, 2009 at 7:53 am
to my surprise
i like it
really good
XD