wanna help me with my engish, i have writers block pretty much?
for this enlgish project, i have to write a 100 word sotry, no more no less than 100 words, and ive pretty much got some writers block. in the sotry i have to include he words
1) Lucy
2) Joyous
3)Run/ Running/ Ran (any form of ran)
4) Siberia
this is what i have so far
The cool wind twisted around Lucy’s face as she stood patiently watching the sunrise. The colours of the sky ran together like they were purposely made to be there, and while she enjoyed the moment, taking everything in, one breathe at a time,
- Emily J
May 15th, 2009 at 3:22 pm
It’s “one breath at a time” not breathe.
But as for that, it seems simple so just continue what you’re saying. Just add detail or something, and I think she meant 100 words minimum, why would you need exactly 100 words? That doesn’t even make sense.
May 18th, 2009 at 6:22 pm
she realized that something wasn’t right. from her balcony she could see the shiny lights of a bunch of police cars right across the block, right by were Ami, her best friend lived.
she put her grandma’s big and old jacket with a the Siberian flag on its back on and went out to see what was going on.
when she arrived at Ami’s house she realized her friend, was covered with a black blanket, just like those dead bodies in her favorite show, C.S.I.
it was as it timed had frizzed and someone had riped her in two like a piece of paper, the colors of the sky and the beautiful sun chining all disappeared in front of Lucy’s eyes, all her soundings were melting like a candle when its lighting. she could not understand what was going on
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well i hope that will help you a little, keep adding more and more maybe it will turn out to be good