New poem, after 2 months of writers block! Please comment?
Still silence break, let darkness fade away
Dim colour wake and greet the light of day
This sickness grows, this sickness breathes inside
But live I must, to burry what has died
Still silence, move, let words come pouring free
Yet win or lose, I am no longer Me
This sickness grows and fever burns the skin
But stand I must to fight what it may bring
Copyright ©2008 Mona Khaial
I’ve been in writers block for 2-3 months now and it was very frustrating but I was finally able to write something yesturday. Hopefully it wont happen again. Tell me what you think? Thanks.
I’m with allpoetry.com as well but It’s been a while since I’ve posted anything
- mojo2346