I need to write a concrete poem. How is this? It will be in the shape of a candle.

Nice
And warm,
Lighting the
Darkness with
Your Dim light
Creating some
Shadows and
Mysterious
Figures
Move.
Used
Before
Lights,
Putting
Light
In a
Room.
Couldn’t see
Without you,
And your little,
Winking flame.
Thanks to you,
We could see
In the dark, but
Now we only
Need you for
Your sensational,
Smokey smell.
I added colors to it and it is in a different shape then if you just copy it and paste it.
- Marko

a concrete poem is a poem in the shape of whatever u are writing about. assonance is the repetition of the same middle vowel soundin two or more closely grouped words. onomatopoeia is the use of a word to sound like or imitate what it describes.
- Myranda D