Questions

ok, as you can see, i am a very bad writer.

if you’ve read writers block 2, then this might make sence

so the guy in the beggining was very deppressed. he had dreams of jumping off a large building. this dream had been haunting him.

at the very end of the story,he has the same dream. however, the girl(from writers block 2) comes into his dream and says something. the guy thinks and says, “ok. let’s go” and they both leave the building safely. then he wakes up.

what can the girl say that sounds more poetic than “dont jump!” and make the guy say what i typed in? is it too much to ask for a real answer?
- rubik

well, it’s not really writers block, im just having trouble thinking of the perfect beginning for my book. I write a beggining, and then when i look over it the next day, it sounds horrible to me. I need ideas on how to write a good beginning.
- Maddy