Need an ending to a mystery short story I’m writing?
I wrote a short story about a teenage girl named Adrienne who was acused of shooting one of her teachers, but really she was framed. Who should have framed her? HELP pleasE???
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Tags: Mystery Story, Mystery Writing, Short Story, Story Writing, Teenage Girl
October 16th, 2008 at 7:45 pm
You’re suppose to begin with the end in mind. Think through it and next time prepare an outline or synopsis so you always know what direction you’re going and avoid writing yourself into a circle or a standstill.
I could give you an answer, but then it wouldn’t be your original story. Good luck.
October 19th, 2008 at 1:37 pm
If she’s on drugs, then the person who sells the drugs to her. If she’s pregnant, the father of the child. If she’s part of the gossip grapevine, some bottled-up-passionate victim of hers.
October 21st, 2008 at 8:44 am
The principal, to hide an affair he had with the teacher’s husband.
October 24th, 2008 at 4:45 am
The principal who had ‘abused’ that teacher. He framed it on Adrienne because he had liked her mother when they were younger but she’d turned him down for adreinnes dad
October 27th, 2008 at 5:12 am
Mr. Green (Adrienne’s young, sexy english teacher) and Adrienne spend a lot of time with each other after class. Adrienne has a crush on Mr. Green. But Mr. Green only helps Adrienne with english after school hours (he doesnt like her back).
Adrienne is popular. She is class president, and captain of the cheerleading team.
One day while Adrienne is waiting after school hours, she is inside Mr. Green’s classroom waiting for him to come meet her up there for “help.”
The Janitor knows Adrienne’s after school routine well. So, the janitor sees Adrienne alone in the classroom. He rapes her. During the middle of the rape, Mr. Green comes in the room and tries to grab the Janitor off of Adrienne. The Janitor and Mr. Green fight while Adrienne runs out of the room and calls the police.
The janitor uses his broom and bludgeons Mr. Green to death. Quickly, the janitor thinks of a master plan, and begins ramming his face into a nearby desk. The janitor starts to hurt himself, by punching himself in the face.
The police show up.
The janitor tells the police that he walked in on Mr. Green raping Adrienne. The janitor tells the police that he grabbed Mr. Green off of Adrienne, trying to help Adrienne. While the janitor and Mr. Green were scuffling and fighting, Mr. Green was the better fighter and was on top of the janitor punching him in the face. So, the janitor tells the police that he asked for Adrienne’s help, and that Adrienne grabbed the nearby broom and began bashing it over Mr. Green’s head. Therefore, Adrienne killed Mr. Green, not the janitor.