Implication needed for my creative writing?
For my creative writing, I want to show that two people have developed from girlfriend and boyfriend to lovers. So I’m looking for a sentence where it goes: ______ became _____, however it should show the progression of a couple to lovers, with the latter blank serving as an implication for something sexual.
The more sentences you can construct will give you a better chance of scoring 10 points as best answerer.
Thanks in advance guys!
The blanks should be actions
- Harry
Tags: Better Chance, Girlfriend And Boyfriend, Implication, Sentences, Thanks In Advance
May 15th, 2009 at 6:32 pm
Friends became lovers.
edit:
ok. how about “soft kisses became thrustful, deep and wet.”
“light touches suddenly became more intense.”
“racing thoughts became fixated on the soft moans escaping her soft wet parted lips as he slid in and out.”
how graphic do you want?
May 16th, 2009 at 8:23 am
It’s not about giving the words a place, it’s about giving them meaning. One way to give meaning is to set the plot–if friends where to become lovers, you might want to set some irony. I would first start off, say for instance, with their childhood friendship–their first kiss at a very young age; then I would jump to perhaps their first dance in middle school (perhaps 8th grade). Now, first, I would state that they are fiends buy as both of them seem to be dating other people their seems to be some jealousy–perhaps not enough time together like they used to, ect. Now, then I would say that in their teens, they decided to experiment–first, sex came along, then drugs. Putting both together, I would say…that the girl was into drugs due to bad influence (boyfriend) when one day, when she was high and mad at her boyfriend, she decided to seek closure from her best friend. And one thing led to another.
And that’s when their relationship took the role of lovers, although both think it was probably a mistake; or was it?
I have a minor in Creative Literature with it’s focus in the Discourse of Colonial and Post Colonial Theory. It’s not a lot but enough to keep me writing short stories.
You might want to give a bit more detail about the story, perhaps a short summary, in order for some one to choose the right words. A short summary would be nice to read.
JACTChemist