Im writing a short story, ideas on what should happen next?
Hey guys, im writing a short story for english class… and im stuck on what should happen next. its really weird but basically what its about is a girl wakes up and she has no idea where she is and she see’s a bunch of weird things and shes trying to get home….. and i dont know how to end this.. i need to establish where she has been this whole time. and how she gets home (if she does) Any ideas?
- dapimpinbeotch
Tags: Hey Guys, Short Story Ideas, Whole Time, Writing A Short Story, Writing Class
October 17th, 2008 at 12:29 am
Take her on an adventure as a dragon rider or something. Something fun and illusinal. GOOD LUCK!
October 17th, 2008 at 11:53 pm
She clicks her heels and repeats, “there’s no place like home.”
What ever you do, don’t have her waking up from a dream. That literally screams cliche.
October 19th, 2008 at 1:03 pm
Um she starts crying or something because she doesn’t know where she is and she feels like she’ll never get home. Then some weird three eyes sloth with tentacles asks her what’s wrong and she says that she wants to go home and the slothtopus takes to her to a portal thing and then she goes through it and sees herself sleeping and she has to like go back into her body or something.
October 22nd, 2008 at 7:25 pm
She looks around and she starts crying but then she sees a talking snail. She says ” Hey you, snail. How do I get home?”. Then the snail says ” You are home. Didn’t you know?? “. Then she looks around and she hears a dog bark. She calls her dogs name ” Spot?!”. She sees something rusteling like rabric. ” Why’s the sky rusteling?” She thinks. Suddenly the sky has a hole in it. The whole surrounding – sky, trees, everything comes tumbling town. The whole surrounding was only a fabric sheet of plastic, tied on clothes lines all around the area from 8 poles.. She only sees a black surrounding. Suddenly out of no where ” Surprise! Happy Birthday!”. And all of her family members and friends jump out. The lights are on now, and she finds that she’s in her own room the whole time! The talking snail was one of those recording things that talk like a parrot.
GOOD LUCK! Hope I helped. Good story BTW :]]]]]]]]]]