Im writing a kids story, and im having the worst writers block? Help?
What to do at the zoo?
There are many fun things to do at the zoo
Sit back and I’ll name a few
Everywhere you turn there are animals galore!
Oh no! Did you just hear that loud roar?
…..Can you please help me with the next part, i would like it to be a lion but i dont know how to write it. Can you Pleaseeee Help
Thanks
- Super Girl
Tags: Animals, Lion, Loud Roar, Writer's Block, Zoo
May 26th, 2009 at 6:34 am
Sure, no problem….***ahem****:
For every line there is a fee,
have you any clue how you’ll pay me?
once printed and published, it’ll sell like hotcakes
and how much of the lion’s share am i to takes?
the screaming of the monkeys , with their awful stench,
arguing my case , before the elephant’s bench;
” give him what’s due him, whilest he’s still alive!”,
pg.13, ,pg15, and pg.25!”
the elephant was unmoved, and trumpeted a fart,
“insofar as this trifling matter, i’ll take it to heart!”
“But first, my kind sir, I must ask this of you,”
where for art is thou mutual contract, hast thou lost it in the loo?”
….i might as well have…as i pause in quick review, for i have nothing for my efforts, but verbiage on Yahoo..
May 29th, 2009 at 5:01 am
HMMMM…..
it’s the lion with his mane
he’s the king of beast
look out! don’t stand to closely when the start to feast
Everywhere you turn animals abound
Oh, no did you just hear that sound
It’s leopard in the sun
bathing with all she’s got
shy animals that leopard
oops you missed a spot
everywhere you turn aniamls are at bay
oh, no did you just here that neigh
AND SO ON AND SO FORTH hope I could help
oh no, did you just hear a yelp?
just kidding. wish you well
May 29th, 2009 at 11:22 pm
Here comes Paul, and here comes Peter
Too bad we forgot ’bout meter . . .